That Day

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Not a worry in the world

Everything is fine

No trouble in your life

Not even through mine

 

I walk through a field

Of flowers and trees

The wind is whistling

No one can see me

 

I look to the sky

The clouds surround

I stand there for hours

With that beautiful sound

 

Wind flowing through the leaves

It relaxes me

I wish you could see

How beautiful this must be

 

If only That Day were true

The world would turn blue

I can see

It's just a dream

 

Comments

hlapoint

When I wrote this poem I wanted to show my point of view of the world. It is a beautiful sight, but only a few people see the beauty in the world.

iballenilla

very nice

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