Desperation

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80550
United States
40° 29' 20.7708" N, 104° 54' 55.8864" W

And then one day, magically,
all of your motivation escapes you.
Draining
out onto the concrete. Gone.
You’re trying to sweep it up, but it just
slides through your fingers.
And there goes your motivation
into the nearest gutter.
(bye)

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