Disguise of My Sublime

Mon, 09/15/2014 - 13:00 -- oreo59

I look at the guy in the mirror.

His ecstasy can't be any clearer!

See him in the hall, he'll give you a high-five!

See his walk hear his talk, this guy is alive!

 

He's the popuar kid in school!

Man, this guy is cool!

He chills with his peeps and they goof before they go,

Back home from school, Cool Guy says, "Later, bro!"

 

I get home and drop my bag.

Heck, I think I'll take a drag.

I suck a ton,

Is what I'm thinking.

 

My eyes are dead.

I see red.

I HATE MY LIFE!!!

*takes it*

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