Doubt

Location

 Doubt by Jarvis McLaughlin

 

planning

doubting

Out there I feel like there is something

but for you there might be nothing

I think I'll take my chances

And if things are not worth while

A bird only flies if it's wings keep flapping

Calamity may send you back to the ground

Then I will walk until I can fly once more

I bet you will remain stunned with muscles sore

planning

doubting

 

Leap of Faith

Leap of death

I can do this

but you might miss

It is within my grasp

Oh! do not reach so far

I have another plan

but will that even work

I could just give it a try

Fine, I will just watch you die

Leap of Faith

Leap of death
 

Traveling

Wandering

I have reached the ground still in tact

where will you go after this act

There is a place of refuge over yonder

your body aches you must rest my friend

One step at a time I can make it

I don't think you have enough in you

I'll make as many as possible

this journey is just impossible

traveling

wandering

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