Dream Girl

Sat, 05/18/2013 - 22:26 -- rjk1008

Location

16159
United States
41° 9' 21.6864" N, 80° 27' 57.6936" W

She moves like a butterfly bounding from flower to flower. Her features are fine-tuned like the keys on a piano. When the sun shines down on her head it reveals a golden halo of hair. Flowers blossom in her presence. Her eyes burn with a cold blue flame that is hotter than any other. Determination flows from her soul and into her actions. Winning is no longer considered excellence, but has become a standard.

Comments

rjk1008

This was about a girl that I really liked backed in high school.

rjk1008

This poem was about a girl that I had a crush on in high school.

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