Dying from his cold heart

Cold as the glaciers that gather around the attic waters

into the eyes of a girl long gone

it hurts on the inside worse than anything

Do you get that feeling?

staring at the night sky

scattered thoughts that you leaves you to ponder

these thoughts...theses.. thoughts

Numb to the feelings that were once so alive

the need for answers led her desire to self-destruct

My smile, gentle perhaps playful,sweet...

A picture can say a thousand worlds yet stay still through the night

This poem is about:

Me

Comments

celhar4

8 years ago

As a reader,I really enjoyed this poem and it really pulled to the heartstrings of the overall

meaning. your a good writer keep going just watch certain spellings

and you've got great success!!

sabria21

8 years ago

Thank you very much I try to capture something that everyone goes through and since my break up (around January) was horrible and I feel like just dying cause he was first actual love...and then this poem came about explaining how I felt. As for the spelling thank you for your criticism, spelling hasn't been my best area I happy that I was able to pull some emotion from my readers ^.^

sabria21

8 years ago

Thank you very much I try to capture something that everyone goes through and since my break up (around January) was horrible and I feel like just dying cause he was first actual love...and then this poem came about explaining how I felt. As for the spelling thank you for your criticism, spelling hasn't been my best area I happy that I was able to pull some emotion from my readers ^.^

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