"Elegance, Intelligence and Eloquence" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 16/1/2006

Location

United Kingdom

I Grace The Stage With ... " Elegance " ...
Then Utilise Words With ... " Eloquence " ... !!!

My Wordplay Sways With Common Sense ...
And Does NOT Play With THIS ... NONSENSE ... !!!

While Those Who DO Have NO DEFENCE ...
And Should Do This Put Down Their Pens ... !!!!!!!!!!!!

My Use of Intelligence DISMISSES ....................................... Irrelevance .....
And Has NO USE For FAKE Pretence ... !!!!!

Most Poets Seem Like Governments ... !?!
And ABUSE The Art For Dollars and Cents ... !!!

In Some Ways Yes I'm A Little Like THEM ...
But DON'T Be Fooled My Wordplay PROVES ...
That I Am From A ... DIFFERENT School ... !!!!!!!

My Use of Phrase Is Smooth and Cool ...
And Does Not Run From Dark Issues ... !!!

HELL YES My Words DESERVE Payment ... !!!

In Times Like THESE ...
INTELLIGENCE And ELOQUENCE ...
Is Simply This ... EDU-TAINMENT ... !!!!!

I've Learnt From Men Who STAND AGAINST ...
CORRUPTION In Our Governments By Using Rhyme And INTELLECT ...

While Those Who CLAIM To ... " Serve and Protect " ...
KEEP Cashing Cheques At OUR Expense ...
And Commit CRIMES of ... NEGLIGENCE ... !!!!!

Governments Who GOVERN Men ...
And KEEP Talking About DEFENCE ... !!!!!

Whilst Sending Soldiers To Their END .... !!!
So They Can CLAIM Dollars And Pence ... !!!

Whilst Recompense For Those Who've LOST ...
Is USUALLY A ... "Quick Pay Off" ... !!!

What Form of Intelligence Leads To DEATH .... ?!?
And Leads To PAIN UPSET And STRESS .... !?!

I'll Give You A Guess In FACT I WON'T ... !!!
It's OBVIOUS It's Something Known As VIOLENCE ... !!!

INTELLIGENCE Used By Governments ...
Is Claimed By Them To Quell TERRORIST Men ... !!!!!!

PUNISHMENT And DETAINMENT ...
Is Used To ABUSE And Then Confuse ... ?!?

That's Just My View But What Do You Choose To Think You're ... Shrewd ...
Well If You DO ... What REALLY Is ... " TRUE " ... ???

ADMONISHMENT Should Be ISSUED ... !!!
To Those Who CHOOSE To ........................................... Ignore CLUES .... ?!?
And Basic Things That Give Them PROOF ... ?!?

It's A TRAGEDY ... When People FEED OFF IGNORANCE ...
And REJECT Use of ............................................. Common Sense ... ?!?

That's Why I Choose To Use The TWO ... !!!
INTELLIGENCE And Common Sense When Dealing With The ... " Fairer Sex " ...

Those Who HAVE LONG Sexy Legs ... !!!
And Curves That Make My Muscles FLEX ... !!!!!

Those Who Move With ELEGANCE ...
Are RARELY Those Who Have ... "Much Sense" ... !!!

A Woman Who Shows INTELLIGENCE ....
Is Likely To ... Sleep In MY BED ... !!!

REPLAYING The Sex INSIDE Her Head ... !!!!!

But Those Whose Legs Are QUICKLY Spread ... !!!
And CLEARLY Have NO Self Respect ...
Are QUICKLY Asked To Do What's Best ...

By Use of DIRECT ... " Eloquence " ...
NEED I Say More You Know The Rest ... !!!

Women THESE DAYS Are So Complexed ... !?!
And Now Leave Many Men ... PERPLEXED ... ?!?

INTELLIGENCE In Most Seems SPENT ... !!!

Words Like THOSE May Well OFFEND ... !?!
So What If THEY DO Bring Your ARGUMENTS ... !!!!!

But Be ELOQUENT And INTELLIGENT ... !!!!
Then Girls I'll Treat You Like A Gent ...
And May Just Give You COMPLIMENTS ... ?!?

I'm A RARE BREED Now ALMOST EXTINCT ...
A Sexy Man Who ALSO ... THINKS ... !!!

INTELLIGENCE Yes And FIVE STAR Sex ... !!!
Come On Now Girls Would You Like A Turn ...
At Getting Up CLOSE With The Man ... BIG VIRGE ... !?!
An INTELLIGENT Man With ELOQUENT Words ... !!!

See My Use of Verse Is NOT Perverse ... !!!
And RARELY Uses ADVERSE Verbs ... !!!

I'd Rather Get INTO Subjects ...
And Find Out What's INSIDE Your Head ...
And AFTER That INSIDE YOUR BED ... !!!!

I'm NOT A SELF OBSESSED Poet ... !!!
Who's Written This To Get Some SEX ... !!!

If You DON'T Like ME Then Go In PEACE ... !!!
My Pen and I Will Be ... Just FINE ... !!!

Rhymes I Design Take Up My Time ...
And Help My Mind RESIST Felines ...
Who Seem To Think That Love's A CRIME ... ?!?

From Women To Our Governments ...
BOTH Seem Confused And CLEARLY Choose ...
Arguments ... WITHOUT Defence ... ?!!!?

While Me I Guess Have Been ... " God Blessed " ...

With ...

" Elegance, Intelligence,
and CLEARLY Yes, Great Eloquence ! "

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