Evening detimentals

A laugh carried sullenly 

A cry, a vengenace , a remedy

Soulfully searching your instruments

The needle takes over your common sense..

This is the time where lights flicker

Shuddering against the cool air

Fingers twitching over the cold object

Lord forgive these heinous acts..struggling against prospects

Keep this environment warm

Take me away from harm

Pushing the piercing device above the vein

Goodbye world take me away from this pain...

 

 

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