Every Night And You

Mon, 11/12/2012 - 15:51 -- jxyooj

Every night when I'm alone, I think of you.
I think of how much happiness comes from you too.

When I'm cold, you keep me warm.
When I'm curious, you listen to my concerns.

I wanna be that person who you talk to about yourself and your day.
I still have something I want to say.

There's a heart I found and I want to love her;
I think I found that special someone one night I want to be a part of my world.

You know I can't sleep because I've fallen for you.
You are beautiful and gorgeous too!

I love you so much, I can't contain my happiness! I couldn't love you any less.

When It's at night, I tell you good night.
Hey girl, sleep tight!

And when I dream, I dream of how much of an angel you are to me......
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.............

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

This poem is beautiful, and it leaves space for everyoen to feel their own feelings on love while beautifully writing your own. Artful and beautiful!

I was curious, did you ever show this to them, the whom it is you were writing this for? Or was this just written for general emotions?

Becca.

jxyooj

Thank you!

I did share this poem to them, and it was a person I met twice. Unfortunatetly, she doesn't belong to me and does not need to be.. this poem probably meant something to her for one minute and it never mattered anymore.

I appreciate your feedback; it really helps me see what others think about my poem besides my friends on Facebook.

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