Falling Asleep

Fri, 05/02/2014 - 20:46 -- AmyLeya

As she walks
She walks on stone
Cold, hard stone sending shivers up her spine

 

As she jumps
She jumps in slow motion
Claiming the air as her own

 

As she lies down
She lies on a cloud
Sinking deep into her own mind

 

As she closes her eyes
She slips away
Further and further away from everything she's ever known

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