Falling into the future

I was looking for rosy skies 

easy path up to success 

But those ways were twisted lies 

pushing me down with less 

 

My heart ached to see reality

the ground was swept out 

but when I fell could I see

what living is truly about 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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