Feel

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Open, sliced

That's how you feel

When they bring down

The first blow

 

When you're drowning

In their pain

They try to make you feel

Without any emotion

 

They try to make you

See what they see

Hear what they hear

But you're already lost

 

Sticks break your bones

Stones scar your flesh

But beneath it all

You remain emotionless

 

That's how you feel

When they bring down

The first blow

When you're drowning

 

When they try to make you feel

Open, sliced

Enjoying the pressure

 

That's how I feel

 

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