Fight

Night so young, 

Innocently,

Just out of teens,

Bravely.

 

First time in a club,

Not so easy,

Try to look relaxed,

Getting typsy.

 

Music in our ears,

Start dancing,

Things getting good in here

Everyone raving.

 

Feeling much freedom,

Going crazy,

Arms up in the sky,

Amazing.

 

Stamp on someone's toes,

Accidentally,

Stand off, here go we,

Defiantely.

 

Adrenaline pumping, heart pounding,

Rapidly,

Gonna smack this cunt, 

Before he smacks me.

 

Before you know it,

Throwing,

Hard right hook,

Connecting.

 

He goes down, not getting up,

Happily,

Get into his mate,

Headbutting,

 

Some smacks me from behind,

Slyly,

Get hit over the head with something,

Smashing.

 

Fall over a trapped body,

Clumsily,

Bouncers start throwing punches,

Fuckin hurting.

 

Before you know it,

Exiting,

Small boy in a man's world,

Learning.

 

Next time it happens,

Will be, preparing,

Train harder in the gym next time,

Winning. 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My community
My country
Our world

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