figments

sometimes
i dream
of you
tendrils creeping
wrapping
around my heart
choking out its last few beats
 
(( thump thump --- ))

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

7 years ago

Powerful expression! 

magnificientfailwrites

7 years ago

thank you so much for the encouragement and support. c:

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