Fine Lines

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what are those on your wrists, dear?

beautifully carved

& drawn with fine lines

inked with crimson,

painted with passion

let me plant seeds on them

and grow flowers 

maybe then, you could wear them on your hair, 

and feel beautiful about yourself. 

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! Please never stop expressing from the heart. Continue the journey of poetry. 

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