Give In

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11741
United States
40° 47' 38.9616" N, 73° 4' 12.1512" W
11741
United States
40° 47' 38.9616" N, 73° 4' 12.1512" W

trying to control my brain
with square shaped drugs and filtered canes
trying to obey the law
with red stained teeth of broken saws
trying to prolong my life
with cheap-seat bikes and gloveless fights
 

but once metallic taste escapes
the cravings wander out to play
and no one knows the proper game
so off they go to mend with shame
by trying to control their brain
with squared shaped drugs and filtered canes...

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