God help me

God help me. 

Give me a hand. 

help me out. 

im drowning in your presence,

but it is evil that reaches his hand out to help. 

to pull me out of these rising waters. 

I can feel the water slowly filling my lungs. 

and as evil helps me out of the dark, murky waters of life

henreplaces the water with flames. 

flames from Hell. 

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