Hell & Back

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32547
United States
30° 29' 45.834" N, 86° 37' 51.1536" W

~Hell & Back
i’ve seen hell & back
i’ve been through here before
the scars lie on my back
i’ve cried many tears
this isn’t fiction this fact
i’ve lost friends
i’ve gained angels
i’ve tried to un twist and bend
all get is tangled
i’ve been to hell and back
it isn’t that pretty
…and thats a fact

Comments

TheFallenSky

The angels part was very well placed. 

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