Here You Are...With Me

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Here I am, a broken man.
Shattered in a million pieces,
Like a vase dropped on the floor,
Almost impossible to piece together again.
And Yet... Here You Are, With Me.
Grasping my hand while sharing my pain,
Holding me tight for my heart to mend.
Knowing the worst about me,
And Still... Here You Are, With Me.
Un-phased, you're the rock,
Able to withstand the erosion and weather,
In this flowing river of my life.
The waterfall, at the end of my journey.
Here You Are, With Me.
I Am Unbroken, With You.

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Comments

Kshepardson

All together a wonderful poem. I could definitely see you expanding in the middle weaving a bigger story for this pair in the fabric of the poem. I love the flow and the subtle imagery.

One thing line 10 *you're

Awesome work! Keep Writing!

sacrifice

Wow, I love the following lines. 

Un-phased, you're the rock,
Able to withstand the erosion and weather,
In this flowing river of my life.
The waterfall, at the end of my journey.
Here You Are, With Me.
I Am Unbroken, With You.

It's so powerful. Thank you for sharing with us :) good job! It's SO inspiring and makes me so happy.

sacrifice

In the second line I mentioned above, you speak of the capability to withstand these things... I think willingness to withstand it is instrumental, too :) just wanted to share that with you. 

Thank you again for sharing! :)

Mole6

I like this a lot! :) Keep writing!

aerynava

beautiful 

BahJiy

*Speechless*

A great poem about the power of love and hope. Amazing.

cherokeemoon

Fantastically amazingly beautifully well done

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