Hey babe, can’t you

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15557
United States
39° 56' 56.2092" N, 79° 13' 21.2088" W

Hey babe, can’t you see?
I know I swore I’d do no harm
But you know it’s insane the way you’ve warped my brain
And it’s causing me great alarm

Can you follow me?
And we’ll find some place that warm
I’d love you to explain, the way that you ingrain
My thoughts with the scent of your charm

The way you write,
The way you speak,
The way you kiss me on my cheek
And get thoughtful when it rains
A tornado is going
Where this storm cloud’s blowing
Babe, you’re making it rain

The way you smirk when you conspire
The way you won’t retire
That old broken radio
You constantly inspire
And set my nerves on fire
And now I’ve told you so

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