Hidden in a dream

Underneath the nose of everyone as it seems

Hiding in the garden full of neem

Never did i realise the dripping sound from my wrist

Drop by drop, the blood flowed in a swift

Deepening the cut, he said 'goodbye'

The tears broke out of my eyes in a suprise

As the feeling of guilt ran down my spine

Breathing stopped and i fell and hit something hard!

Only to realise, i just fell out of my bed, hard!

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