His Last Words

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You're blind but you see ever so clearly,

you're ill but in ways you're perfectly fine.

You're deaf, but you hear so close, so nearly.

You're warm but send me shivers down my spine.

You try to walk but you keep falling down.

You fly, but you can't seem to spread your wings.

You're the king of the throne who gets the crown,

you're the vivid happiness the world brings.

You cry yet you say everything's alright.

You're decisive but you give easily.

You apologize but give them a fright.

You made a promise to just please me.

These are all the people you were.

But now my life is all a blur.

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