Hollow Frame

Fri, 10/04/2013 - 20:10 -- Allan8a

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When all I do is perpetuate

I become the skeleton of inadequate

proportions that have no sensible value, 

no value to identify with the truly consequential

Loyalty is lost, motivation quits

my soul becomes into pieces and bits

Neutral I seem, maybe I'm not

Better renew why risk to rot? 

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