Hope with in the confusion of sadness

I wake up everyday confused 

a year ago I was the same

nothing within me nothing outside

I am nothing and nothing is what lies within me, 

Everyone is better than you,

you are nothing,

but a bag in the wind,

No hope for me,

in time it will change 

 

but wait

push those feelings away 

push those thoughts away

You,

You, are better

You, 

Can achieve anything ,

and, 

You are much more than just a corpse 

you stir joy in your family 

you bring love to your other

you have dreams.

you have dreams you will reach.

Don't be sad.

you will be,

I promise,

no more confusion from now on,

You Know what you want,

You know who you are,

no more confusion

no more confusion.

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
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ayara205

super cool dude

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