Human Doing

Sat, 05/24/2014 - 23:08 -- shpalm

Location

Connections I make

The faces I take

for granted

Moving with purpose

Showing only surface

gestures

Of good will

I hope to fill

a void

Every step brings me further

I hasten with renewed furvor 

to achieve

If only I recognized my own need

I hide cravings for self love with speed

toward success

NO permission has been granted

Keep doing! my internalized self ranted

Human doing

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