I feel flawless

Mon, 11/24/2014 - 02:15 -- rexiusm

everyone works hard to achieve their dreams, even me

living in a houe of 8 is hard, even for me

but i wake up and work flawlessly, because this is me

flawless, is what i believe i do everday

but some many say my life is full of mistakes and broken people

who can no longer stand on their own feet, i am me

and i feel flawless throughout my body

so i work to achieve my dreams, as flawless as i feel.

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