I hope you know the deer is sarcastic

Sat, 02/03/2018 - 16:02 -- graced

Dearest,

I cannot wait any longer

To put this sheet of silver

Between your two cells of white -

Through it like threading a needle

 

My dearest,

It is killing me,

To see you so far away but

I must face you now -

Before all is lost

 

Darling, my sweet,

I simply cannot wait

You cause me too much pain - 

My heart, my soul,

My hurt all due to you

 

I'm sorry, my dearest,

Children cry, mothers die,

Fie, may it be on you

For their tragedy is your causing

So then I must come against you

 

Love,

Your impatient dear

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TamingOfSeaWolves

very original i love this!

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