I know the pain you

I know the pain you felt inside

No where to go. No where to hide

Gave up your own life

Down your arms, the stroke of the knife

You came into the light

Yet unleashing creatures of the night

Feelings have no word

Yet a word from you I wish I heard

 

For you, no more crying

Was it worth it, dying?

You were tired of trying

No denying

Now your spirit's flying

I feel pain, no lying,

 

Deaths are not easy

I know it's true

So do you

And I know you couldn't handle the pain

Now there's a blood stain

Death happens, I know

But it doesn't soften the blow

Why must you go

 

For you, no more crying

Was it worth it, dying?

You were tired of trying

No denying

Now your spirit's flying

I feel pain, no lying,

 

Hope your pain is no longer

After you pulled the trigger

I remember your words,

"Even though it hurts,

Pain will be there, but you must keep trying"

Wish they kept you from dying

But now I'm crying

 

For you, no more crying

Was it worth it, dying?

You were tired of trying

No denying

Now your spirit's flying

I feel pain, no lying,

 

You went up there

Left me here

Just wish you'd stayed

Now your gone away

Least you have no pain

Now your looking down on me

Wish my pain would set me free

But now your alright

I'm talking to you at night

Hoping all is well above

 

For you, no more crying

Was it worth it, dying?

You were tired of trying

No denying

Now your spirit's flying

I feel pain, no lying,

 

Least your not hurting, though it hurts me more now

Can't escape my pain, can you show me how?

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Comments

amayy14

im so sorry you went through this. i lost a my best friend to suicde so i can relate to the pain and confusion. you wording flowed so well, im impressed to say the very least

Cutter Girl

Thanks for the positive reply, i work very hard on all my poems and this one especially, sorry about your friend too, i know it' hard for both the people who commit suicide and the people their death affects.

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