I look foward (Allen Harris)

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The past is my darkness.


The great future is my light.


As the great stars of the night.


Standing on still water.


Which is harder?


A drip of water or a mountain's rock.


The great waters puts a hole on that mountain’s rock.


So now I must climb the mountain’s top.


Walking through the darkest caves to reach the other side of  the Earth.


From the mountains on high to the heavens on the skies.


A young man who carries himself with great pride.


So I think the lord this day.


Still in my living.


I Hope to make it to my old age.


If the lord willing.

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