I look to You

Mon, 01/20/2014 - 12:37 -- millie

My days are rough
and the hours slurr by
I dolefully walk alone
with no one by my side

The harmful effects
of my stoic friends
vex me to evoke
the unnatural trend

It drizzled in my house
and my face turned red
who could I look to?
that's when I lifted up my head

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741