I Notice

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4737 Tomlinson ave
United States
33° 55' 43.104" N, 117° 28' 14.3796" W

You’re hot

You’re charming,

You got looks like no other;

Everyone can see that.

 

Your smile melts ice

Your eyes captivate all,

You got looks like no other;

Everyone can see that.

 

Your laugh’s sexy

Your body’s perfection,

You got looks like no other;

Everyone can see that.

 

But behind those good looks

Lies something more;

Everyone can see you’re hot

But I notice more.

 

Others see your body, your pretty face

But I see the beauty behind that.

I see the years of hard work,

I see the worn heart;

I see a person, a person looking back at me.

 

Others see your smile, your pretty eyes

But I see the beauty behind that.

I see the kindness and compassion,

I see the sadness and sorrow;

I see a person, a person looking back at me.

 

Others hear your laugh, your sexy voice

But I hear the beauty behind that.

I hear the courage bursting forth,

I hear the anxiety and insecurity;

I hear a person, a person looking back at me

 

Others can see and hear your sexiness,

But I notice the beauty behind it.

I see the person behind the pretty face,

A genuine, beautiful human being,

Who notices me too.

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