I Rise

I rise from what I hear,see,and think, I rise from what i am told, I rise to help myself find me, I rse to bring truth to all,And as I rise I look back to to all who cant see, hear and think, I rise for a better life within and instead of out, I rise to become beautiful and get rid of the ugly. But as I rise I feel safe and calm. As I rise I feel myself grow into into the person I born to become.I rise.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

you added so much meaningfyl thought to why you rise

it's about determination and perseverence

keep writing, nice job

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