I would Change

Mon, 03/31/2014 - 16:34 -- IAMarie

What would I change you ask? Id change how people judge a person for whats on the outside, they do not judge for whats within. You see because whats on the outside could be ugly and terrifying and then be beautiful and couragous on the inside. Id change hurt into happiness. Id replace all the money I have to releif my parents stress. I would Change the way my mind is. How im happy one minute then the next upset. I would change my Grandmas heart for mine. I would rewrite my past because ive messed up. But i wouldnt Change who I am.

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