If nature, why not you?

Fri, 07/31/2015 - 16:22 -- ITWALL

What makes this world awesome          

Could it be the air we all breathe

Or did you fight and defeated something that didn’t come with ease

 

Is it the lushness of the trees

Or the fact that you and I can dream

Is the hardness of a rock

Or that you know longer have to worry about being mocked

 

Is it the changing skies

Or that there is food, clothing, shelter you can finally buy

How about the soothing sounds of the oceans

Or that you finally arrived, despite all that commotion

 

How about the increasing mountains

Or did you just overcome a mountain

Is that parts of this world have yet to be discovered

Or that you my friend have yet to been discovered

 

From nature to man nothing was created unequally

Everything was designed to be equally awesome so do not

Call those trees beautiful and awesome

Until you recognize that hey “I’m beautiful and awesome”

 

The skies are destined for change every day so

Don’t think that you’re never going change

Mountains keep growing every minute, every second

If that’s awesome then don’t you think improving on something is awesome

Don’t you think that not making the same mistakes over and over again is awesome

Don’t you think wanting to shed your previous self is awesome

 

My brother you are in this world now

Which means you’re a part of something awesome

Which means you’re awesome

 

My sister you are in this world now

Which means you are part of something awesome

Which means you’re awesome

 

Ladies and gentlemen all of you are in this world

Which means all of you are a part of something awesome

Which means all of you are awesome!

 

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Our world
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