Inhale,Exhale

Wed, 09/17/2014 - 19:26 -- Tamia

She smokes her lungs out everyday

hoping one day her lungs would rot away

 

she smokes the gray mist down

watch as people seem to frown

what was so special for them to see

The only thing special was

a girl they think is crazy

 

It's so hard, it's so hard to breath

her lungs are yearning,yearning to be free

SO she smokes her lungs out everyday

hoping one day her lungs would

rot Away....

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