It All Came Tumbling Down

Murder she wrote, at least that's what the scars showed. A slap in the face and a lost of innocense all in a blink of an eye. She was so young and bright. Her smile started from her left ear and ended at her right. That day he started the abuse was not the worse, and how was she able to put up a fight. She was so young and bright. From the top of her head to the bottom of her curled up toes she shined like a star. Then all this happened and she became dull and insecure. She lost all hope of a happy ending. Then the truth comes out and carries her pain away. All those years of suffering days after days. She was so young and bright. All the pain and suffering was now put to rest. She could breathe a little longer and smile a little more. But even in the dark her tears created puddles on the floor. She was so young and bright. He sucked the personality out of her and made her feel like a disgrace. Once it was restored it was still never the same. She was emotionally,physically,and verbally abused and it changed her whole world. She watched family fall apart and friends gather closer. Sometimes all she really wanted was support and someone to hold her. She was so young and bright.

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