The last time

Sat, 11/22/2014 - 01:28 -- Soulae
If I only knew after our lips touched that night, that it would be the last time we kissed,
the last time we touched with our eyes, staring down our hearts,
prints so deep it entered our souls,
the last time we talked,
conversations filled with love,
Laughter afterwards,
The last time we hugged,
held each other tightly until our clothing sinked into one, 
making warmth, 
heart beats heard,
don't u ever leave me type of hug,
The last time we got mad at each other and made up,
The last time we just stared at each other for no reason and smiled,
Then turning into laughs
and playing around,
The last time I could say, "This is the last time,"
Only If I knew that, it was the last time...
 
 
 
 
 
 

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

wow, passionately deep

you put alot of energy in writing this piece

the beauty of poetry is that it can be conveyed powerfully with few words

well said

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