Laying in Bed

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I wish you would've stayed,

and I wish you would've cared.

I wish you would've looked at me

and seen how you stripped me bare.

I wish you would've loved,

and I wish you would've cried.

I wish you would've thought

and noticed how hard I tried.

 

I wish you would've stopped,

and I wish you would've listened.

I wish you would've held me

and make my eyes not glisten.

I wish you would've remembered,

and I wish you would've kissed.

I wish you would've talked

and maybe things wouldn't have been like this.

 

Now I wish for you to come back.

And I wish for you to fix me.

I wish for you to let me in,

and I wish for you to see,

that you made me into nothing

but a simple little tragedy.  

Comments

domjes61

That was beautiful. Keep on writing you have a wonderful talent even if these things happen to you, use it to your advantge the best poems are heart felt feelings.

 

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