Life Desicions

Wed, 04/24/2013 - 22:36 -- Kercee

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95453
United States
39° 4' 42.4128" N, 122° 56' 37.5612" W

How to know what you've done right
It's the bright of the light
The way your lips curve
The sights the sounds, they give it away
Kind of like a salty blue ocean bay
How you know you've done wrong
The dim of the light
The silence, it's devastating
Darkness is crawling in
Life gives you what you give to it
"You get what you give" most people say
It's all okay.
On most days

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