the little mermaids aroma

Sat, 07/08/2017 - 23:48 -- kayfree

suddenly I saw a maiden as beautiful as can be but upon closer inspection, I had to say pew-wee she had hair red like a firestunning blue eyes to desirebut her scent I tire pale skin and a pink dressbut she smelt of a salty mess. she reeked of fishlike my last eaten dishoh, how I wish she did not smell like fish. a princess of the waterKing Triton's daughter soon I will rule over ocean and landwith many armies at my command. but this stench I can not stand so kiss the girlbut this odor makes my head twirl  so after her shower,so she doesn't smell so sour,I will gain the power. so it is her that I'll marrythe maiden with black hair is rather scary. now she is minethe sea and land are quite divineand hopefully, my wife always smells sublime.

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