A loss

At first you feel numb
Your heart will feel frozen
No feelings will succumb
The crash will be sudden

Your emotions will explode
All at once, not at all
Your heart will have an episode
It will fluctuate, then stall.

Your life will never be the same
Your perspective will be altered
The storm will bring on thunder and rain
Your emotions, forever faltered.

Your soul becomes a deep, dark pit
When you lose the one that saved it.

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