The lost and the gained

Tue, 07/30/2013 - 04:23 -- Sterces

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People dance while bright hearts are being lost

searching for the process where hearts are found

your soul may become harmed, bruised, or destroyed

you begin to feel like your soul is bound.

 

Envy controls you with endless questions

the love is eternal while the feelings fade

you feel controlled by administrations

wishes run through your mind to be re-made.

 

Harmless pain is both the cure and the cause

laughter and smiles must be forced to be sheen

life being destroyed by the lion's claws

flashbacks are colliding into a scene.

 

Thoughts don't quit but happiness yet remains.

Life is scorched, however there are no stains.

Comments

kieran96

Great diction

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