Making you proud

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avlaminck42

i work

go to school

stay around family

stay around you

do you smile at this?

i stay up late to do my best

get up early to finish what i started

do you love me yet for it all?

do you see in my eyes the pain

the tired body i have

the worn out hands

dont get me wrong we all work hard in this world

but do you see it?

do you think to yourself about my work

do you smile ?

are you proud?

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