Matter of Believing.

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Cast shadows on me. Let me fall. What hand could reach me? 

Light Beats dark. Light beats dark. 

Throw me into the furnace let the fire consume me. Let my soul dry. Let me cry. 

Evil does not endure, there will be peace, there will be peace.

Let these thoughts of death rage on! My mind is shattered. Ode to the broken. 

it is only a matter of... 

Let lies control me and let deceit be my closest friend

There is yet hope if you would just...

As I hold this death to my skull, 

Love is waiting if you would just...

As I trigger my pain in fear. Let me forget. 

If only you would... 

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savigirl14


Please don't let pain override your life. I bet you have so many great things about you and that so many care about you.

ky.thornton.1

Thank you for reminding me that there are still human people in this world who actually care about strangers. That's awesome! The words that are in this poem came from a really dark moment in my past. It is kind of like a warning poem and a poem for those who felt the way I did at that point. I wrote this to show them that if they could just believe in something more in this life and try their hardest to see the greatness within them. They could then believe that they can survive. @SaviGirl14 the world needs more people like you to encourage them that their are people who care and can help uplift you with their words. :-)

-Blessings

KY.

savigirl14

Would you read my poems and tell me what you think of them please?

savigirl14

Just give me feedback in the comment section

ky.thornton.1

No Problem, what is the title of one of your poems?

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