Memory #6 2019

a vacant feeling

in a little house in a little forest 

a lost dream within that little house

a little house under a cedar tree 

 

Comments

Pride Ed

4 years ago

Nice use of repetition.
A sweet brevity you have here.
:)

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

4 years ago

Thank you very much! I appreciate it. 

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