Much Too Much

Much Too Much

 

I was thinking much too much today,

Thoughts of you with a distant face.

 

I consumed much too much today,

Fatty foods and potent drinks.

 

I sang a song much too much today,

It stuck like glue and sucked like you. 

 

I dreamt much too much today.

Of nevermores and childish bores.

 

I walked much too much today,

I hurt my toes, my feet are worn. 

 

I sought much too much today, 

My expectations have exceeded you.

 

I tried much too much today, 

To be near you and be like you.

 

It's all becoming much too much.

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