My Hospital Shocker (Someone so awesome that she saved my life.)

You say I never smile when I look at you

But it's because these feelings in my chest are petrifying

Like hospital shocks after death

You are the only thing on this planet that can give or take my breath

And as I take each step 

I am witness to your beauty and your depth

So will I seize this all for you?

With your faith behind this life

Can you see the strength you give me when you look inside my eyes?

Along with this love my body seems to hide 

But this is not a love letter, it's an invitation inside 

The heart you keep so warm

And all of me is yours and forever in this form

Love shines through my pores 

For only you to explore.

You are my cure

And you'll shake me till I can breath once more

Like hospital shocks after death

You are the only thing that can give or take my breath

I need to let you know your the best 

Because you are my most prized machine

The hero of this scene

Please know that what you do is beautiful 

Bringing light into hopeless souls like mine

Giving me another shot at life time after time 

So it's true I never smile when I look at you

But it's because these feelings in my chest are petrifying

Like hospital shocks after death

You are the only thing that can give or take my breath

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