My Love for Rose

Tue, 01/20/2015 - 15:16 -- 5careyt

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My love for Rose is so great,
my heart melts for her 'til the dusk of day.
The night shatters when she's away,
The sweet aroma, lingers 'til day's dawn. 

Her beauty is so great,
her wondering mind 'til she sees,

Loving her is all I think about,
While waiting for the moment, for her to say "Let's go out."

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