My Mermaid Journey

Once upon a time my beloved asked me

to swallow a potion and dive into the sea

a flipper I'd adopt, with fish friends and curiosity

to seek for my love: an item with best quality

It saddened me to think of we being apart

but the image of exploration sustained my heart

Sabastian, a crab led me into Triton's kingdom

Where I lived with 6 sisters and escaped for freedom

A journey it was to discover

the greatest item for my lover

Once found, I returned to shore

with the item he'd been waiting for

A kiss we shared amongst the sea, he held his item and yelled, "Yipee!"

His excitement brung me to laughter

and since then, we've lived happily ever after

 

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