Needle in the Haystack

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91331
United States
34° 15' 25.3332" N, 118° 25' 40.7748" W
91331
United States
34° 15' 25.3332" N, 118° 25' 40.7748" W

Why do you hide behind walls? Afterall you only need one call for your clique. Why does your clique take number one priority, is it reality, sacrificing individuality? Why do you conform to one norm, one line, are you really that blind? Why are you a robot pretending to be someone you're not? Maybe, you just forgot, to be yourself.

It's not hate but I'd appreciate if it I could decide my own fate. One fine line exists between loving close friends and drowning in the nonsense of others, gasping for air, but no one seem to care that our bare thoughts are important. If the news didn't yet sink, think before falling off the brink: Who was really there for you? Suddenly you blinked. Open your eyes and realize ,your best friend is a treasured prize.

 
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